Pop! (revised)
High above, a child opens her mouth wide hears the popping in her ears, says listen to those funny clouds, mommy. Down below, a bored priest turns to the man in the seat next to him and says 'Hearing...
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what a fabulous web of relations in this ray. and a great take on what is and what seems and what is acting and what isn't and and and ... i like it!
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a wonderful tumbling theatrical journey, onstage and off and above and beyond. i was reminded of tom's speech to the audience at the opening of "The Glass Menagerie," where he states "I bring you...
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thanks, courtney and jim! such wonderful readings make me think i might have a decent poem here...
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amen on the last lines, ray. great edit. time to send it out now, don't you think?
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thanks courtney and jim! i'm trying to put together a manuscript for some contests... but darn i like a poem one day and not so much the next
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Love the revision and that ending, Ray. Yes, I would include this one. hugs, kerri
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yeah, def include it, ray, along with the lover who, and my cat and me, and my fav movie, and ans the phone ... all of which i re-read this morning, and each of which is deserving. good luck w/it.
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